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Over a Rainbow - Clop Lite

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**Clop-Lite Version**

Because someponies may be off-put (read: "can't handle") the sexiness of Over a Rainbow, I've decided to upload a lighter version which omits liquids and "that" panel. :iconfluttershyblushplz:

Enjoy!

Original can be found here:

[EDIT: Original has been removed from dA - a complaint from a deviant led to its removal]

Sketch can be found here:

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is, by far, one of the best deviations I have seen. I have never seen anyone do this scene before, so that's an instant 5 stars for that. The technique you used looks just like the real characters. But the Vision could have been eased in more. It goes from Pinkie Pie wanting to help, to wanting to get in RD's pants. =/ Not to mention that the impact (obviously) isn't as good without the panel that you blacked out. (but I'm lenient and am guessing that is good as well). All in all, it was a very good comic and I am hopeful that you will learn from the insignificant mistakes I have notified you of.